In spite of the rude behavior of most audiences…What i need help is if you could check this paragraphs for me i went over them but i wanted to see if you could help me make it better
if it has mistakes like run-ons ,fragments.comma slices and so on.. Its suppose to be in 3rd person …
One of the reasons is, theaters get new upcoming movies earlier then movie rentals places. For example if a new movies is being release people are not going to wait several months to see it, they will rather go to the movies and watch it there. She or he is not going to wait for a dvd release that takes time to be out. If they wait for the dvd release changes are friends have told them what the movie is about because of the time it took to be release in dvd or blue ray. Bottom point a person doesn’t like to wait for a movie they want to see.
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John U says
One of the many reasons is that theaters get new upcoming movies earlier than movie rentals places. For example, if a new movies is being released people are not going to wait several months to see it as they would rather go to the movies and watch it there. She or he is not going to wait for a DVD release that takes time to be out. If they wait for the DVD release chances are friends have told them what the movie is about because of the time it took to be release in DVD or blue ray. Bottom line a person doesn’t like to wait for a movie they want to see.